The primary couple are a jewelry designer and an ex-con -- in both senses of the word, convict and con man. As a person who enjoys looking at new designers' work, I wish Denison had gone into more description of Zoe's creations. But description, either of the jewelry or the locale (Las Vegas) isn't Denison's strong point.
The secondary couple are a mega singing star and a nightclub owner. Again, the backstory for these two is really well done and their motivations believable. But also again, the description of Jessica's concert and Noah's club are sadly missing.
I'm really hoping that Denison learns how to add pointed description to her writing because then she'll really be a killer author.
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